My friend wants to feature me, in his soft core heart break song
Guest verse is mine. Rate me on 0-10?
Genre- soft-core love rap
Last summer went cold
Now m sittin alone
With this Hennessey
Thinkin through the memories
That, what went wrong and why?
Girl remember, at sixteen we started off
And you started tellin lies
I loved you from inside
And you even faked your smiles
Have you forgotten? All those nights
We used to dine
Then dancing till day, in the blue moon light
Making water ripples, sittin by the pool side
It all felt good but damn! It soon died
Now m torn apart
Watching you in someone else's arms
But you seem gleeful
Blood in my veins, feels like venom, when i see you
Remember all those things, and tell me how you feel
I never let you sneeze
Never let a tear roll down to your cheek
Now you coming with a sorry, it hardly makes a change
You are forgiven girl, but things will never be the same
Kindly rate my lyrics on 0-10 scale?i would give it 7.9
as its not an 8 but very close to it
i agree with the other guy that you should replace the word sneeze
and replae gleeful
because these lyrics were flowing really well until the word gleeful
to me it the flow just got cut off there
theres heaps of words similar to glee
so change it and all should be good
i like these lyrics
emotional and descriptiveKindly rate my lyrics on 0-10 scale?Would of been an 8 if you didnt put %26quot;Never let you Sneeze%26quot; in.. Remove that and replace it then its an 8.Kindly rate my lyrics on 0-10 scale?About a 7 (but take out the I never let you sneeze)Kindly rate my lyrics on 0-10 scale?6.5
you should lose that %26quot;never let you sneeze%26quot;
it's also boring.... sorryKindly rate my lyrics on 0-10 scale?I will give it a 9
Its so sad......Kindly rate my lyrics on 0-10 scale?AWWWW...
2Kindly rate my lyrics on 0-10 scale?okay a 5 if its suppose to be rap.
a 8 if anything else.Kindly rate my lyrics on 0-10 scale?I give it a 6. Kindly rate my lyrics on 0-10 scale?8 1/2
work on the flow a little and it will be greatKindly rate my lyrics on 0-10 scale?6... lyrics like this are everywhere! think you should write something more catchy...
